My edits for Dragonbreath 2 are back (working title–and ONLY the working title–"Ninjabreath.")

They’re not bad. Mostly minor–changing a sequence or two, adding a bit here and there, making more full comic panels, nothing in the "By the way, re-write the whole book!" vein that I think most authors are secretly fearing.

And, in other news, hermit thrush in the front yard! (It has to be a hermit-thrush, since they’re the only ones who overwinter in North America.) It’s sort of ironic…as soon as I complain about the lack of species, I get thrushes, brown creepers, savannah sparrows. That’ll teach me…